May 30, 2019

Review –Caine Prize 2019 Shortlisted Stories


On May 20th, the Caine Prize for African Writing released the shortlist of the twentieth edition of the prize. The stories have a sophistication that leaves the ready stunned. They embrace a medley of themes: refugee matters, lesbianism, human trafficking, social stigma and scamming. One sees that women are dominating the contest, with four female authors shortlisted as was the previous year. Nigerian author, Lesley Nneka Arimah, has continued to make waves at the Caine Prize, having been shortlisted twice in the past.  This year, she is shortlisted for her story, Skinned. The other stories are Wall by Heron Hadero (Ethiopia), All Our Lives by Tochukwu Okafor (Nigeria), It Takes a Village Some Say by Cameroons Ngwah Mbo Nana Nkweti, Sew My Mouth by Kenyan Cherry Kandle.

Skinned is the story of a woman who couldn’t find a husband in a community where unmarried women walk the streets uncovered (nude). You are covered by your parents until you reach a critical age at which your father begins to pay tax if you must stay covered. For wealthy parents, paying taxes to save their daughters isn’t their problem. Sadly, poor parents often don’t have a choice. The main character of the story, Ejem, is forsaken by her poor parents and becomes a subject of stigma, making it unfeasible to keep a job.  In the end, she runs into one of the wealthiest women in the world, Odinaka, who, though unclaimed (unmarried), remains covered; her wealth enables her to stay above the law. Under Odinaka’s umbrella, Ejem finds the protection, as well.

Wall is the story of a refugee kid who finds himself in The US, unable to speak English. His inability to speak English makes him a fish out of water, unable to have friends. Prior to coming to the US, he and his parents had sojourned in Germany, long enough for him to learn German. Eventually, he finds a German scholar who, though understands English, is desperate to keep his German alive. They find fluency in German isn’t the only thing they have in common; the professor had been a refugee during WW1. From the story, one gets the feeling the author is broad in exposure and thought. However, the African feel is missing in the story, other than the fact that the character comes from Ethiopia.

All Our Lives is a story set in Nigeria and is written in the third person (plural).  It is about boys who leave their villages hoping to make it in the city. They end up as fraudsters who use bogus IDs to deceive unsuspecting folks they come across on dating sites. Except for the slow momentum build-up, the story is so well written that one is left wondering if the author isn’t an ex-con man.

Ngwah Mbo Nana Nkweti's, It Takes A Village Some Say, is one about a girl trafficked from poor parents in Cameroon to a family of diplomats in the US, who couldn’t have children. The trafficked woman fills the void so the family is total.  But, with time, the couple faces financial difficulties. The prospect of going to college is ruined. The girl takes money from a news journal to give a bogus story of her abuse by her American parents and finds a financial breakthrough. She solidifies her income through whoring with white kids, eventually growing in fiscal strength to liberate other trafficked kids across America.  The author exudes depth and an understanding of diverse cultures.

Cherry Kandle comes with the story, Sew My Mouth. The story wields the unmistakable vibe of Kenyan stories and is about a woman in her twenties who lives a stealthy lesbian life with another woman. Her partner is under pressure, suspected by her mother and a man who wishes to marry her. When it becomes obvious her boyfriend is aware of her unconventional lifestyle, she attempts suicide. The main character is left devastated.


I am a Nigerian but I think the contest is between Ethiopia, Kenya, and Cameroon. When one considers that Heron Hadero’s story, though profound, is lacking in African groove, it leaves the contest between Cameroon and Kenya. I’m afraid that, for Kenya, it is going to be back-to-back –the distinction in the elements that make a story extraordinary in critical, but the ability to exude sobriety in how these elements are used helps a story to stand out the most.

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